Outline
Opening shot of a picture mounted on a wall of a superhero holding a lady in his arms intimately.
Shot pans around the room to a shot of half a bed and the bay windows showing the balcony outside
In the bed is a lady sound asleep under the covers.
Through the bay window you see a dark figure land on the balcony
The shot switches to the darks figures display he sees his wife sound asleep in bed.
It switches to a scene of him smiling (maybe just his smile and nothing else)
He looks back inside a man’s arm then suddenly drapes over the sound asleep lady.
A shot now looking from above Blake outside is now shown he is mortified
He walks to the edge of the balcony and leans on the ledge contemplating what to do, he’s distraught and confused for his facial features.
His powerful white and emerald costume begins to flicker to an evil black and ruby almost sending him schizophrenic.
He turns around his suit now in a powerful black and ruby he walks over to the door
He pulls the sliding door so hard it flies off the edge of the building breaking some of the balcony on its impact
He steps inside the room
The now awake lady and man arise from bed
Cecil realising what is happening jumps up out of bed and makes a break for the half open bedroom door
Blake raises his hand and gives it a quick swipe and close the door with his telekinetic powers
Cecil now lost on what to do look for a nearby object which happens to be a lamp and picks it up
He makes a dash for Blake and tries to strike him
Blake raises his and Cecil rises of the ground dropping the lamp in the process
Blake throws Cecil at a wall rendering him unconscious
Gertrude runs over to Cecil to see if he is ok
She turns around only to see Blake moving towards her
Blake throws a swift hand movement and knocks Gertrude away
Blake then grabs Cecil by leg a begins to drag him towards the balcony
Gertrude yet again tries stopping Blake from hurting Cecil but Blake uses his telekinetic to knock her on to the bed (I thought we could use maybe a telekinetic bubble around Blake it would look cooler and open his powers up a bit could have it destroy some of the room too or something on those lines)
Blake then makes it outside and picks up Cecil by his neck and holds him off the edge of the building
Blake’s face is scrunched up in anger but he still doesn’t know what to do
Cecil is staring back at Blake in bits he thinks he’s about to be killed
Gertrude makes a further attempt to make Blake stop
She grabs hold of his arm but doesn’t affect Blake what so ever
Blake knocks her away using telekinesis again(see here I thought we could have another telekinesis bubble again which is on around Blake and Cecil and so when she tries running towards them she can’t and is struck back by the force and then slips on some rubble and falls off the balcony but it’s just an idea like)
Gertrude is knocked back and slips on some debris from before she falls to her death
Blake realising what has just happened throws Cecil against another wall
Blake then dives down to save Gertrude knowing it may lead to his death as well
Distinguishing shots flick between Blake trying to get to the rescue and Gertrude falling to her death
A shot of the road sees them both fall to the ground
A bus or some vehicle drives by at the same time and black the view of the viewer not saying what has happened
Once the vehicle has driven by Blake is stood there with Gertrude is his arms Blake’s costume now in his heroic white and emerald glimmering in the moon light
He and her fly back up to the balcony
Gertrude gets out of Blake’s arms sharply and unloving and walks to see if Cecil is ok
Blake a broken man walks over to the edge of the broken part of the balcony he looks down at the city below the camera now above him showing him and Gertrude and Cecil in the background
Blake still looking down at the city his cape whisping (made that word up but I like it) in the wind a broken man posed with such power at the same time
-Fin
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